comment to power

Ilike how you found an example in the first Act and expalined how M is reacting to the possiblility of gainig and achieving more power .Yes he is a good warrior. Now what I want you to do is prove wha tyou are saying. Where is your evidence in the text to back that up. This will help develop your writng. Bring in the quotes where you see ithaving impact ot to show where he is tempted to gain more power etc... and then you explain how tha tchanges him.